Notes to Poem: Road to the Rifted Rock
Peter Y. Chou |
Preface: This poem was born from synchronicity and serendipity. Writing these notes has been truly a joyous spiritual sadhana. Once in a while, Nancy Dean Mercury emails some interesting photo, drawing, or quote that inspire me to write a poem. I've not heard from her in almost a year when she sent on January 27, the grapefruit photos with warmest regards "The blessings are to be shared!" On January 31, she sent an untitled photo of a massive rock at the end of a "vanishing point" road. Since I've written a poem on the "Vanishing Point" and its connection to the Platonic Lambda Λ ("Soul of the Universe"), I was happy to receive another photo for my collection. At first, I couldn't connect these two photos of grapefruits and giant rock at the end of a road. Then the grapefruits seem to stare at me like a pair of eyes. I recall Nancy's photo of Found Eyes that inspired a poem almost ten years ago. Suddenly, sage Chu Hsi comes to mind and prompts me to reflect on the rifted rock. I would travel down this "vanishing point" road as my spiritual sadhana and climb that rock. After realizing that this "Rifted Rock" resembled the one Dante climbed in Purgatorio 4 as depicted in Doré's engraving, I began writing this poem. When Dante reached the summit, he saw a chariot of light, reminding him of Phaethon's chariot and being struck down by the thunderbolt of Zeus. Since Saint Barbara is the patron saint of thunder and lightning, I invoked her to protect me from harm. I sent this 30-lines poem finished at 9:49 pm on January 31 to Nancy, asking her where was the rock photo taken. She replied on February 1, that it was on Interstate 10 toward Phoenix and included a map noting Eagletail Mountains. The eagle is symbolic of Dante's flight to Paradise (Purgatorio 9), and Beatrice is compared to the eagle in staring at the sun steadily (Paradiso 1.46-48). Anthony Damiani is mentioned three times in these notes (Sadhana, Chu Hsi, Spinoza), as he was my first spiritual mentor. Dante cites Phaethon four times in his Commedia and knows his rashness and downfall. Therefore he prays to Apollo for guidance in his heavenly ascent. On February 7, I realized that my poem invoking Saint Barbara's protecting me from Zeus's thunderbolt was too tame an ending. So I concluded the poem with a more positive image Krishna's chariot taking me to the light of ten thousand suns and illumination. In these Notes, I thank Plato, Confucius, Christ, and Emerson for their wisdom. |
Commentary on Poem "Road to the Rifted Rock":
She sends me an email "January clarity"
titled "So open visually as to be clear". |