John Ciardi: Friend or Foe?


He threw poems into the garbage
when the first line didn't grab him—
his way to weed out 300 poems sent to
him each week at the Saturday Review.

Dick Maxwell told this story to his class
at Foothill College Poetry Workshops.
That's how John Ciardi made lots of enemies
to those who never saw their poems in print.

My memory of John Ciardi was different.
March 19, 1972, New England Life Hall—
Ciardi's talk: "The Longest Walk in the
Universe: Dante's Divine Comedy".

That was 45 years ago, but I still recall
his first words— "A man is defined by
his attention. Dante's attention was God.
That's why he experienced Paradise."


My attention was protein structure—
the Chou-Fasman Predictive Method
became a science citation classic,
the most cited paper in its field.

After his talk, cheese and drinks were served
in the lobby. A lady asked how many years
it would take to read Dante in order to go
to heaven. Ciardi replied "A lifetime."

I asked why is Dante's walk the longest
in the universe? Ciardi said "Dante went
through Hell, Purgatory, and Heaven—
isn't that's the longest walk of all time?"

Then I cited Plato's Phaedrus (248e, 249c)
on the soul's 10,000 years transmigration.
But those who studied philosophy will have
wings to bear them straight to heaven.

Since Dante is savvy with philosophy,
he would go to heaven instantly—
so his walk would in fact be
the shortest in the universe.

Ciardi patted me on the back and smiled—
"Why of course! He did it in a week!"
I was touched by his deep humility and
on that day, Ciardi became my friend.


  — Peter Y. Chou
      Mountain View, 5-1-2017

John Ciardi (1916-1986)
Saturday Review weekly
Poetry Editor (1956-1972)



Community Church News
Ciardi's 3-19-1972 talk



Dante's Divine Comedy (1321)
John Ciardi translation (1970)