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Six Persimmons (1270) by Mu Ch'i (1200-1274), Ryoko-in, Daitoku-ji, Kyoto
The Persimmons: a Painting in a Poem In his poem "The Persimmons," Gary Snyder goes "deep in the dark of a tomb" and emerges with a persimmon ripe to the bottom... one of a group... that might have been drawn by Mu Ch'i." Here the poem rises beyond space-time to the realm of the spirit. Mu Ch'i, a Buddhist monk from Szechwan excelled in painting wild geese. His Kwan-Yin triptych with "Crane" & "Monkey" (1245) at the Daitoku-ji, is considered by many as the greatest masterpiece of Chinese painting. However at the Daitoku-ji, Mu Ch'i's small ink painting Six Persimmons is even more revered by Zen masters. The six persimmons may symbolize the stages of enlightenment as well as the creative process or mental states of Mu Ch'i when he worked on the painting. Snyder may even have composed his poem with the painting in mind. Exploring these possibilities, let's compare Snyder's poem with Mu Ch'i's painting: |
Mind of Mu Ch'i | "Six Persimmons" Painting | Snyder's "Persimmons" Poem |
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(1) Darkness of Deep Sleep; Unconscious (No-thoughts)
(2) Twilight
(3) Daylight of
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(1) Two black persimmons: from the dark void or emptiness to manifestation (brush full of ink)
(2)Two gray persimmons:
(3)Two white persimmons: (4) Painting's background: |
(1) Seven years of patience while the persimmon tree incubates her fruit. Also "deep... dark... tomb" (2)"The persimmons are (3) the ripe persimmon (4) The blank sheet of |
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